miércoles, 14 de noviembre de 2012

Remembering you

My adorable teacher told as to invent a poem about first love, this is what it came out.

My First Love

There was he,
and the time passed like a snail
when I first met him.
My world started shaking
and some butterflies were growing,
the strange feeling was absorving me
when I saw you walking.
My life would not be the same 
when I saw the door for happines 
open to me.


1 comentario:

  1. Very well done Mechi! I appreciate the extra effort that rhyming implies. Your poem sounds very nice.
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